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Q. I'm only 11, so don't be TOO harsh
I woke up, it was just another day. What day was it? I was pretty sure that it was a Monday or Tuesday, hard to say. I had no calendar, ran away 2 birthdays ago. I was forced to live from street to street with a friend. I was supposed to meet my newborn baby sister, her name was Delilah. I visit to see how the family's doing, but I keep hidden in those trees in the backyard. I ran away because my parents said they didn't want me, easy as that. My name is Estrellia Neveu. I originated from Paris, but came here to America.
I'm pretty sure that they're happy right now, I only had my dog, Killer, to sniff out food for me. He was a good german-sheperd.
Yeah, and that's probably up to how far I got to, i'm just making this up as i'm typing it
The girl's age is 11 too by the way
I woke up, it was just another day. What day was it? I was pretty sure that it was a Monday or Tuesday, hard to say. I had no calendar, ran away 2 birthdays ago. I was forced to live from street to street with a friend. I was supposed to meet my newborn baby sister, her name was Delilah. I visit to see how the family's doing, but I keep hidden in those trees in the backyard. I ran away because my parents said they didn't want me, easy as that. My name is Estrellia Neveu. I originated from Paris, but came here to America.
I'm pretty sure that they're happy right now, I only had my dog, Killer, to sniff out food for me. He was a good german-sheperd.
Yeah, and that's probably up to how far I got to, i'm just making this up as i'm typing it
The girl's age is 11 too by the way
Answer
I'm 13 tomorrow. Here's a little edit to your story:
After the day my parent's said they didn't want me, I packed by backpack and my small suitcase with my clothes, sleeping bag and my special blanket and comb. I took a bottle of water with me, and all my savings, even if it was only $4.75. I know I'm only 11, but I'm going to run away today. Somewhere faraway, with my golden-retriever dog named Goldie. My name is Estrella Morris. I come from Paris, but came to America.
With my dog Goldie and friend Kelsey, we lived under a staircase outside an orphanage in a small town where we hear a lot of fun and never have to worry about getting bored. I got a small free job of shining people's shoes and getting a dime from anyone who would like their shoes shined.
It now has been 2 years I ran away, and all 3 of us are happy. Though, I journeyed each year to see my parents from the backyard, hiding. I was supposed to meet my newborn sister whose name is Delilah.
I eventually tell the orphanage people about us and what we've been doing, and we get orphaned and live as orphans. Though, just in case I make up my mind, I still shine people's shoes and earn money. I now have $7.98. The $4.75 cents was spent.
I'm 13 tomorrow. Here's a little edit to your story:
After the day my parent's said they didn't want me, I packed by backpack and my small suitcase with my clothes, sleeping bag and my special blanket and comb. I took a bottle of water with me, and all my savings, even if it was only $4.75. I know I'm only 11, but I'm going to run away today. Somewhere faraway, with my golden-retriever dog named Goldie. My name is Estrella Morris. I come from Paris, but came to America.
With my dog Goldie and friend Kelsey, we lived under a staircase outside an orphanage in a small town where we hear a lot of fun and never have to worry about getting bored. I got a small free job of shining people's shoes and getting a dime from anyone who would like their shoes shined.
It now has been 2 years I ran away, and all 3 of us are happy. Though, I journeyed each year to see my parents from the backyard, hiding. I was supposed to meet my newborn sister whose name is Delilah.
I eventually tell the orphanage people about us and what we've been doing, and we get orphaned and live as orphans. Though, just in case I make up my mind, I still shine people's shoes and earn money. I now have $7.98. The $4.75 cents was spent.
What's on your bucket list?
I wanna do a lot before I leave this world
House??????!!!!! You boring ppl
Answer
Learn to play an instrument
Learn one other language properly. I'd like to speak German.
The one that's on everyones list : SKYDIVE BABY!!
Learn to snowboard
Learn to swim
Go backpacking around South America, currently working on that one.
Live in another country.
Visit the following countries : Canada, Mexico, United States, Egypt
Sit on a beach in Maui drinking a cocktail
Get myself a job in photography
Some day (in the not so near future) have children.
Learn to play an instrument
Learn one other language properly. I'd like to speak German.
The one that's on everyones list : SKYDIVE BABY!!
Learn to snowboard
Learn to swim
Go backpacking around South America, currently working on that one.
Live in another country.
Visit the following countries : Canada, Mexico, United States, Egypt
Sit on a beach in Maui drinking a cocktail
Get myself a job in photography
Some day (in the not so near future) have children.
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