I have a story and need help with what to do next? Please help?

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Okay so, those of you who have read one of my previous questions, I have a story going on. Unknown But Not Invisible. Not an official book. but I hope one day it will go beyond my E-mail drafts :D :P
So, first off thanks for looking and reading to help my retarded writer's block. I greatly appreciate it, people <3
And if you're reading to be a jackass, I'll be one RIGHT BACK so don't, please?
Second, here's the question setting. There's about four main character. Kit Bell, Cade Sanchez, Rose Saving and Danny Woods. Kit and Cade are like brothers, but not. Kit's 18 and Cade's 15 along with Danny and Rose, but they don't care. Kit thinks that Rose, Danny and Cade were so close to him that they could be his siblings. Danny's only really known them for a few months, but the events that they'd been through together made their bond strong. Danny was stabbed in the stomach with Rose as an eyewitness, and Cade and Kit were nearby so she got them and Cade called and never really saw Danny but since Kit was older, he went and tried to help danny before the ambulance came. Danny was alright after a few days and went home with his guardian, Zak.
Danny is basically adopted. His birth parents were only fifteen when they had him. Mitch and Katie Woods. Mitch is Zak's brother and they were very close as kids, and now. Zak was only five when Danny was born, so he didn't know anything about it. Katie was scared and gave Danny to her brother, Manny Carter who was twenty. He wasn't nice or close to Katie much, but he was still her brother and she trusted him with her baby. Manny accepted Danny, but unhappily. He had Danny for fourteen years. When Danny turned fourteen, Manny was so frustrated with life and the child he didn't even want and let all the anger out of Danny who he scared for life with what he did. He beat Danny, kicked him out and did so much, Danny thought of suicide all the time. He wasn't liked at school. Kids thought he was too different. They all listened to fun, light music like Katy Perry or Lady Gaga while Danny listened to Rise Against, Green Day and Weezer for the most part. He loved punk music the most, and loved how Rise Against was trying to change the world with every single song that he got involved with movements and protests of al kind. He especially helped with bullying stuff. He was bullied by almost everyone in schol. Like I said, they thought he was too different. He was nice, understanding, sweet, thoughtful, and one of the best guys you could ever meet, and the boys of school thought it was weird. They thought that everyone should just agree with them and think what they think and do what they do, but Danny dared to challenge them and very often, win. His biggest enemies were Shane Jake, Nick Tolley and Harry Walter. They make his life miserable in and out of school. They pushed Danny too far very often and they were the ones that always got physical. Danny had begun being a very good fighter, fighting them. They did actualy fights and Shane sometimes kicks books out of Danny's hands or steal his backpack or close his locker at school because he doesn't want to get in trouble at school, but fights him in a shortcut alley that Danny often takes. Manny finally just got sick of Danny that he turned to his brother-in-law, Zak. Zak had just turned twenty and was a police officer. He also lived in a trailer that was big. Zak saw how much Danny was scared of everything and took him in. Danny flinched whenever Zak would move his hands and feared his own shadow. It took a few years for Danny to fully trust that Zak wouldn't hurt him and Zak loves him like his own. He's not supposed to tell Danny who his real parents are because Katie and Mitch were ashamed of haveing him at the age they had and abandoning him to an abusive man. Katie didn't talk to Manny after she discovered he hurt Danny. Danny likes hanging around the police station and helping with stuff. They liked him because of his personality and his eyes. He has hetrochromia, a genetic effect that make his eyes different colors. HIs right is blue and his left is green.
Danny met Rose because Rose had moved there from Arizona and didn't know anyone and Shane, Nick and Harry's girlfriends bullied her the same that their boyfriends bullied Danny, so he stepped in and helped her. She fell in love with him, but he has no idea. They've been friends for a few months and they met Cade and Kit at lunch at school. Shane and his girlfrend Piper were bullying Danny and Rose, so they stepped in and started hanging out. Kit wasn't very eager to meet anny considering he ahd Shane after him, but Danny was different and they clicked and are best friends. They hang out almost everyday and love it. They were all intersted in the paranormal, so they were starting a ghost hunting team. Rose's house was old, big and haunted, so they'd start there.
Main thing is, I was thinking that Rose could do something like leave around Danny's birthday but not tell him but leave like a note or something because she thinks it would be too hard to tell him in person. It breaks his heart and everythign but maybe she could come back a while later without telling his too or something? Ideas?

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Wow! that sounds great!
i think it would be really awesome and dramatic of Rose just leaves, but doesn't even leave a note, just an object like an old necklace that is important to her. Your ideas are amazing, and so fresh and new!

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